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Fatal Beauty

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Hey, lookit that! I'm not dead. And I'm very happy how this turned out. Frost is one of the easier ones to get right. And I finally pulled off a pissed off expression! AND a proper ref sheet!

Things I can say. They say write what you know. Frost is my natural aggression, she reflects me nicely. In tense situations, she'll be the first to get aggravated, or the first to start shouting. Listen to her, most times she knows what she's doing. She can still be a bitch sometimes, but it's for the common good.

Also, she hates being called a "Lady". And you should all know that's a title, one that she received and earned through lord Blaze, and her own ruling.

I bet none of you thought I'd give her a proper name, did you?

Lady Kiesah "Frost" Jandro (c) Insane-Randomness 2013
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I like to give my critiques two parts. The good part, and the bad part. So, lets start off with the good part!

The good points.
So, to begin, I gotta say that the description is just... amazing. Like, the whole back story. It really does flow nicely, and it would help any body who had never met, nor seen Frost in any of your stories get a good idea of who she is. I also like the idea of giving her a full name. I dunno, it's just... better than being dubbed with a single name. I just like it. The detailing that you have put into Frost, too, is very, very nice. That coupled with the back story... it's very juicy. Very nice stuff.

Also, it isn't too bright and flashy. It looks... 'proper'. You could say that the basicness of the ref goes with Frost herself, actually, for being a bit stubborn, hard headed, and... cold...

The bad points.
Now... I only gave the originality a 3 star rating, because... well... it's a reference sheet. And, for the majority, they're all the same. There's no deviation between them. And, no offence, this is like many I've seen before. So... yeah... other than that, honestly, I can't think of any other way that it could be 'improved'. So, yeah. That's all, really.

So, overall, I do really like this piece. If you could somehow make it more... different, but not stupidly.. might help.